sophies sprite adventure by Lewis

March 26th, 2014

Once upon a time, there lived a girl called Sophie who lived at rose cottage with her cruel bad tempered aunt. Everyday, she escaped into her garden and played on her own.
Late one afternoon, she was at the bottom of the garden. Suddenly, she spotted a little creature hiding behind a blade of grass it was a little sprite called Toadshade. She told Toadshade all about her mean aunt but then Toadshade came up with a brilliant plan. It was to swap the sugar for the salt and put prickly concker shells in her aunts wellies. Sophie said “that’s a brilliant plan she whispered so she did as the plan said. After they had done the plan they ran outside and started to giggle. As quick as a flash, Toadshade dissapiered into a large tree. As Sophie ran inside she saw her aunt spitting out her tea ” yayayaya that’s salt not sugar how did that happen” said her aunt. “it could of been the sprite do not be so silly sprites aren’t real there just a fairytale Sophie said, ” no I saw a sprite called toadshade and he swapped the salt for the sugar and put concker shells in your wellies. I told you sprites aren’t real.”

6 Responses to “sophies sprite adventure by Lewis”

  1. 3ar on March 26, 2014 5:10 pm

    Well done Lewis you are a good writer

  2. 3ar on March 27, 2014 6:48 pm

    Thank you

  3. 3ar on March 27, 2014 3:07 pm

    Wow! You wrote BRILLIANTLY! Do you like writing?

  4. 3ar on March 27, 2014 6:47 pm

    Yeah I like writing

  5. 3ar on March 27, 2014 6:49 pm

    And I like drawing

  6. 4jt on April 29, 2014 11:24 am


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