Sophie’s new adventure by Silvie.

March 3rd, 2014

Once upon a time there was a little girl called Sophie who had friend called
Toadshade ! Toadshade was a sprite ! Sophie ran to a big tree where Toadshade always appeared. Toadshade wanted to know what Sophie had planed for them to do
. Sophie told Toadshade how much she loved playing tricks but she always felt sorry . Toadshade felt the same way as Sophie . Sophie had a plan . ” Maybe we should play some tricks on lots of people and set up a doctors and you could dance ” said Sophie as she thought about the reasons why they shouldn’t do it . Toadshade thought aswell and said ” Maybe we should only play tricks on your aunt and your next door neighbour . ” So Toadshade flew back home and got Toga Yoga , Arty Hearty and Cherry Berry whilst Sophie threw
water bombs over the fence and pies aswell as that Sophie put lots of Hedgehogs on her Aunties bed. Soon Toadshade and her friends and Sophie were making a doctors and checking people . After a couple of days Toadshade and her friends waved goodbye and disappeared into a huge tree . When Sophie walked in her aunt was booking a doctors appointment . Sophie grabbed a slice of pizza , hurried to bed and made a plan of what she , Toadshade and Toadshade ‘ s friends were going to do next . The end.

One Response to “Sophie’s new adventure by Silvie.”

  1. Miss Roberts on March 9, 2014 4:08 pm

    Well done Silvie. An exciting next chapter introducing some new mischievous characters!

    In your next chapter see if you can use some ed,ing,ly openers to mske your writing even more effective.

    I’m looking forward to reading your next post already.

    Miss Roberts

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