Princess rose ‘s big adventure part one by Silvie .

February 11th, 2014

there once was a princess called Rose . One summers evening she. Went for a ride on her pony. The sunset more quickly than she thought it would and soon found herself lost in the forest. Suddenly she saw a cottage up ahead .Its roof was thatched with straw  and it’s windows glowed red. The door creeeeaked open and a high pitched voice told her to come in.Princess Rose couldn’t resist she jumped of her pony and tiptoed into the hallway where she saw an evil,ancient and wicked witch,who had a magic position guide in her hand,and her gloomy werewolf behind her howling in the icy,frosty .The cruel,enchanted witch was silent for a few minutes as she let her evil charms sense princess Rose.Princess Rose saw her eerie glow she was terrified but this was the only cottage in the whole forest kingdom .Meanwhile her family were on the edge of craziness and sent there people to go to search for her.Back at the forest the witch whispered croackly ” Come into my home it must be scary in the woods with just you and the dazzling moonlight wa ha ha ha” .Princess Rose thought she really was doomed .But … The witch bought her some animal eyeball cake .Now she wandered was she doomed? She was getting quite bored without her crazy family charching all over the place.So she decided to see what the red glowing windows was . She found it out and learned lots of inportant info .It was that the wicked witch had an evil plan up and running.So she decided to look for an exit.She couldn’t  find one she was too frightend because of the shadowy rooms….To be continued.BY SILVIENEWMAN

3 Responses to “Princess rose ‘s big adventure part one by Silvie .”

  1. 3ar on February 11, 2014 7:56 pm

    that is good silvie check through have u missed any word or a . where it shouldn’t be!

  2. Silvie on February 12, 2014 8:14 pm

    Thanks I will check but I ‘ m sure it’s all alright .

  3. Miss Roberts on February 13, 2014 1:46 pm

    An excellent story Silvie. You have chosen some effective words.
    Can you write the next part building up the suspense?
    I look forward to reading it.
    Miss Roberts

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