Nail Soup by Ammaar and Lewis

December 5th, 2013

Once upon a time, there was a traveller who had no money he was so hungry that his tummy rumbled like thunder.Early one morning, he set off to a village on the edge of the great forest.When he got there he set a fire and got his rusty pot out of his old sack.Next, he put the pot on the fire.After that, he tasted the soup, ” so what does it taste like?”grinned the farmer.

2 Responses to “Nail Soup by Ammaar and Lewis”

  1. 3ar on December 5, 2013 3:00 pm

    WELL DONE for useing speach marks Can you write more at home? try to use some ajecttives

  2. 3ar on December 5, 2013 3:02 pm

    realy good I love it I think it is fantastic
    from Krish

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