Maxy Laxy goes to China by Joseph and Leve

December 5th, 2013

One day, there lived  a pleasant  boy  called  Maxy Laxy, who  was always  happy. He had a small house  with a wonderful  magic  stone! Every  day he used the magic stone  at midnight and it would shine like a golden orb in the sky. Sadly, on the next day he found out that he had lost his stone in China so he packed his bag of disgues and set off.As he was walking,he yelled,”China here I come”!


2 Responses to “Maxy Laxy goes to China by Joseph and Leve”

  1. Mrs Woodhill on December 5, 2013 3:06 pm

    Wow! What a great start to your story! You have included really interesting details about your character so I really want to read on. Does he find his disguises? Can you use an ing opener like we have been using in literacy this week? I can’t wait to read more soon! From Mrs Woodhill

  2. 3ar on December 5, 2013 3:10 pm

    good work

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